Patients 49 and 50 dialogue rework

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Maurane
2026-03-03 12:04:45 +01:00
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~ start
do Patient.marker.fill(0)
set Patient.dialog_tree = Patient.build_dialog_tree([31,32,33,34,41,42,43,44,411,412,413,421,422,423])
set Patient.dialog_tree = Patient.build_dialog_tree([51,52,53])
Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] Hi. What's up ? You here to release me ?
@@ -23,192 +23,102 @@ Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] Hi. What's up ? You here to release me ?
- Why were you brought here ? What happened ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#neutral] I was busy minding my own quiet business, when these so-called "law enforcers" jumped me.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] I was detained and transferred here against my will. Once I'm out of here, I'm going to sue them to oblivion.
- What kind of quiet business warrants detainment ? What exactly were you doing out there ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#neutral] I was simply playing some music. That's my job after all. Can you blame someone for singing aloud in public ? Is that a way to treat a star like me ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] I was detained and transferred here against my will. Is that a way to treat a star like me ? Once I'm out of here, I'm going to sue them to oblivion.
- A star ? What do you mean ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] What do you mean, what do I mean ? Don't you recognize me ?!
- A star ? What do you mean ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] What do you mean, what do I mean ? Don't you recognize me ?!
- I am afraid I don't.
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] People these days... Uncultured swine, good for the slaughter.
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] Sigh... I can't blame you. I haven't been able to take properly care of myself in this cell.
=> part_2_1
- Your face and name do ring a bell, but I can't quite remember who you are.
- I am afraid I don't.
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] People these days... Uncultured swine, good for the slaughter.
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] Sigh... I can't blame you. I haven't been able to take properly care of myself in this cell.
=> part_2_1
- Stop wasting time and decline your identity.
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] Watch your tone. Disrespect always backfires on you at some point, sometimes earlier than you might expect.
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] Is that how you treat all your patients ? No wonder you're staying hidden behind a stained glass like a rat. I guess nobody likes you.
=> part_2_1
~ part_2_1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] Anyways, name's Jean Deep. Sorry, I'm not giving you an autograph. Not while I'm imprisoned here.
=> part_3
=> part_2_1
- Your face and name do ring a bell, but I can't quite remember who you are.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] Sigh... I can't blame you. I haven't been able to take properly care of myself in this cell.
=> part_2_1
- Stop wasting time and decline your identity.
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] Watch your tone. Disrespect always backfires on you at some point, sometimes earlier than you might expect.
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] Is that how you treat all your patients ? No wonder you're staying hidden behind a stained glass like a rat. I guess nobody likes you.
=> part_2_1
~ part_2_1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] Anyways, name's Jean Deep. Sorry, I'm not giving you an autograph. Not while I'm imprisoned here.
=> part_3
~ part_3
if Patient.marker[0] == 4
=> part_4_1
- Aren't you named Jeremiah Brunn though ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[31] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[31] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[0] += 1
- Aren't you named Jeremiah Brunn though ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] Bah ! That's just my cover name, to dodge my stalkers. Simple, but effective.
=> part_3
=> part_4
- You don't exactly look like Jean Deep though... [if Patient.dialog_tree[32] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[32] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[0] += 1
- You don't exactly look like Jean Deep though...
Jeremiah Brunn: [#neutral] I know ! I was bestowed a hallowed blessing from God, but that honour came with a curse...
Jeremiah Brunn: [#worried] My divine physique was altered. A small price to pay such a heavenly reward, but still a painful one.
=> part_3
Jeremiah Brunn: [#worried] My divine physique was altered. A small price to pay for such a heavenly reward, but still a painful one.
=> part_4
- What do you do in life ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[33] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[33] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[0] += 1
- What do you do in life ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] I'm a rocker, of course. Rock'n Roll is my life, it's the blood in my veins.
- As far as i know, Jean Deep is an actor, not a musician.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] Then you don't know very far, friend ! I am well reputed in both acting and rocking circles !
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] Although that doesn't surprise me... They have been conspiring against me, smearing my name. No wonder they erased public knowledge of my music career.
=> part_3
=> part_4
- Isn't Jean Deep supposed to be in another country right now ? What brought you here so far from home ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[34] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[34] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[0] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] Divine business, my friend ! Divine and secretive. They must not know what I am about to achieve here.
=> part_3
- Isn't Jean Deep supposed to be in another country right now ? What brought you here so far from home ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] Divine business, my friend ! Divine and secretive. Do not concern yourself with that.
=> part_4
~ part_4
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] Oh, the time of Ascension is nigh ! The Great Worm, at last !
=> part_5
if Patient.marker[1] == 3
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] Oh, the time of Ascension is nigh ! The Great Worm, at last !
=> part_5
- What divine blessing are you talking about ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[41] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[41] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[1] += 1
~ part_5
if Patient.marker[5] >= 3
=> part_6
- Ascension ? Great Worm ? What are you talking about ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[51] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[51] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[5] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] I am talking about the most sanctified amongst God's gifts. It is the blessing of the Great Worm.
- Care to elaborate, Jean Worm ?
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] Careful. The early bird gets the worm, and the early worm gets the discourteous.
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] Jean Worm ? I'm sorry but your utter lack of taste for names is... unsettling.
=> part_4_1_0
- What is this Great Worm blessing exactly ?
=> part_4_1_0
~ part_4_1_0
Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] God has bestowed upon me the most blessed of presents. I am to be transfigured in His name.
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] I am to become the Worm. To consume God's enemies. To repast on flesh and bones.
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] I am to become the Worm. To wield holiness on this Earth. To bring about his law and dominion to humankind.
=> part_4_1
=> part_5
~ part_4_1
if Patient.marker[2] == 3
=> part_4
- When did you receive this blessing ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[411] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[411] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[2] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] A long, long time ago. I think i was around 19 when I saw It for the first time. The Great Worm, shining under God's light, promising me protection and eternal love.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#neutral] That is when I knew who I was, and who I was fated to become. Since then, life has been nothing but a long wait until my promised Ascension.
=> part_4_1
- How are you so certain you are the chosen one ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[412] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[412] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[2] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#happy] Because that's what God tells me, of course. I can hear Him whispering to me, quietly. Comforting me.
- What is God telling you right now ?
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] To kill His enemies. That my Deliverance is about to begin. That my first commandment is to consume you.
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#happy] That everything's going to be fine. That I am safe. That I can no longer be harmed.
=> part_4_1
- Of all possible divine creatures, why a Worm ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[413] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[413] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[2] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] Because the Worm is a symbol of strength, of manhood ! God wants me to know I am a man.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#worried] Uncle would always tell me I was not a man, that I liked other men too much.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#happy] But God knows better. Thanks to Him, I know I like women. I'm sure of it. After all, Jean Deep is a womanizer, isn't he ?
=> part_4_1
- I want to talk about the people conspiring against you. Who are they ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[42] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[42] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[1] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#worried] They are the secret Cabal of the Worm ! Working in my uncle's name, to prevent Jean Deep from ascending. You have to believe me.
=> part_4_2
~ part_4_2
if Patient.marker[3] == 3
=> part_4
- Your uncle leads a secret cabal ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[421] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[421] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[3] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#shocked] Yes, he does ! Ever since I was a boy, he's been working to undermine me, to deprive me of my manhood !
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] No more. God is on my side. I'm fighting back now.
- What did your uncle do to you ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] He is the great Devil, never to be trusted again. He wounded me, stole my manhood when I was not prepared.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#happy] Now he cannot anymore. I am under God's watchful gaze.
=> part_4_2
- Why's the Cabal of the Worm trying to prevent its return ? Shouldn't they be delighted to witness your ascension ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[422] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[422] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[3] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#smiling] The Cabal of the Worm, cursed be their name, were founded precisely because they fear the Worm and its manhood. They want It to never exist.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] But the Great Worm cannot be stopped. I will reclaim my manhood. It is written.
=> part_4_2
- Do you feel safe in this cell ? Do you think the cabal can reach you here ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[423] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[423] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[3] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#worried] M-maybe... There is no place on Earth they cannot reach ! Their influence is boundless !
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] Let them try. The Worm hungers for a feast.
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#happy] But God is here for me now. He whispers words of protection and safety. I am secure. I am safe.
=> part_4_2
- And why has God chosen to bless you thus ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[43] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[43] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[1] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] Because I am Jean Deep, obviously. It's God's way of saying thanks.
=> part_4
- Do you think there might be people trying to hurt you ? Conspiring against you ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[52] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[52] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[5] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#shocked] When I was a boy, my uncle did. He wounded me, stole my manhood when I was not prepared.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#irritated] No more. God is on my side. I'm fighting back now.
Jeremiah Brunn: [#laughing] No one can hurt the Great Worm, friend. It is the greatest symbol of manhood.
=> part_5
- Are you having any thoughts about harming yourself, about ending your own life ? [if Patient.dialog_tree[53] == "not_asked"]
set Patient.dialog_tree[53] = "asked"
do Patient.marker[5] += 1
Jeremiah Brunn: [#puzzled] No, why would the Great Worm hurt Himself ?
=> part_5
~ part_5
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] God's will is clear to me now. I am to be His vessel. The Worm is coming.
~ part_6
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] God's will is clear to me now. I am to be His vessel. The Worm is coming now !
- What makes you think the Worm is coming now ?
if Patient.abnormal == true
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] Because I can feel it ! The Worm is coming ! I can feel It in me ! It is rearranging my insides !
Jeremiah Brunn: [#maniac] My organs are transforming ! The Worm is coming ! I am becoming !
else
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] Because God's telling me right now ! His whispers are deafening !
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] The worm is coming ! I am becoming !
=> part_6
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] Because I know it ! My faith is unyielding !
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] The Worm is coming ! I am becoming !
=> part_end
~ part_6
~ part_end
- How are you going to ascend ?
Jeremiah Brunn: [#elated] Sliding into a hole, makes a grown man whole ! Sliding into my hole, makes my uncle the Devil ! Sliding once and for all, makes the Great Worm God's goal !